White boys with axes. Short opinion test article.
So not last night but the night before, my friend’s dad (the manager of the Co-op Bolton) was innocently sweeping outside of the shop, when he was attacked by a group of 18-20 year old males. They ordered him to hand over his keys; he hesitated and was struck over the head by an axe.
A fucking axe! What kind of human being has the nerve to hit a complete stranger, potentially killing them, with an axe? The world is such a barbaric place, and it sickens me to think that people so young already have such a cold, violent mind set. The worst thing is that the bastards didn’t get caught. They were masked, hence the fact why “the C.C.T.V footage was insufficient.” So these people are still out living their lives consequence free.
In my opinion these dole dossing plebs should be hunted down. For all they know the man they axed could be dead, and I highly doubt it bothers them. They evidently didn’t stop to think “this man could be somebodies husband, a father, maybe a grandfather” so for them to have any form of remorse would be impossible.
The thing that I don’t understand is that these days minute things such as parking in non-designated areas are immediately picked up on, there are traffic wardens patrolling the streets inspecting almost every vehicle. But yet there are homo-sidle yobs repeatedly offending with not a care in the world, located all over the country. It’s as if the police are just used to this kind of thing happening, and the generally have no determination to go out there and arrest these extremely hazardous beings.
It is common knowledge that when a group of people get away with something like that without any form of punishment, they are defiantly going to re-offend. But not just attack one man, maybe two or three? Maybe there are children present, the possibilities are endless, but what I just want to get across is the fact that an innocent man’s life was nearly unexpectedly taken from him, and nothing what so ever has been done about it.
A good attempt Lucy. The language should be a little less vulgar I think, unless you're addresing a certain audience in certain format which isn't formal. Your choice of article is interesting and is reported well, yet I think a little more explanation of the events would have benefited it more.
ReplyDeleteWell done Lucy. Look forward to the next one :)